romeyo

Nice work. Note though, The fourth line on the Third verse, where you wrote "She told my that my eyes"... It should have been "She told me that my eyes"... ...

I like the way you used the words... How you expressed everything. Good work. Just one thing though, I could put myself in your shoes, but I really could not ...

Hey, i like the rhythm and the consistency of the poem. The aim of a poem is to paint the exact picture the writer is passing across. I think you ...

M not much of a reader, but the little i read, tells me you have a wild imagination... One that shouldnt be tamed, just nurtured. All you need do is ...