rocketdog11

Ah. Harry Potter fanfiction. I have tried writing it myself and have found that I have to keep starting over. But I digress. I think you have done really well ...

Hello! RocketDog here for a review! This is an interesting concept...the time period reminds me very much of the books that I have been reading recently. I think it was ...

Hello! Rocketdog here for a short review! First of all, good things. You did a really good job developing your story at the beginning. You also did a nice job ...

Hello again... So this chapter was where things were really picking up, and I liked that. With the introduction of new characters, it actually got exciting and things started happening, ...

Hi! This is Rocketdog with just a small review... So lots of things to say about this, but good things. First off, I think your descriptions of the dreams and ...

So I think this was actually really nice, because I've read Les Misérables. I remember always getting confused with all of the Friends of the ABC, but this one is ...

Hello! First of all, wow. This is written really well and given the nature of dreams, it seemed very vivid. It seems almost a gruesome twist on "The Prince and ...

Hi, Rocketdog here for a small review. First off, I want to say that your writing style is very descriptive and quite graphic. It is reminiscent of some other things ...

Hello! Rocketdog here! I used to like Warriors too, actually, so I knew what everything in this story was. This is actually pretty good. It seemed like everything was there, ...

Hello! So, wow. This is really good. I am actually in the middle of the Divergent series right now (on Insurgent), so it's still pretty fresh in my mind. There ...

Hi! Rocketdog here for a review! So, first things first: I like this first installment. It's a very interesting concept. Also, I find the idea of the whole "teleporting" thing ...

Hello! Can I say first that this is really well done? I read the first two, and I should say that you are an excellent writer. It's the same with ...

Hello, just a small review, because honestly I had a hard time finding things grammar wise that were wrong. So, I'll go conceptually instead. First off, I think this is ...

Hello, hello! Rocketdog11 with a short review (honestly, almost everything that needed fixing has been said and it's just a really good start!). So, first off, a death right away ...

So, hello. This is Rocketdog here for a review. First off, I think you have a really good start to your work here. Also, I think the names are very ...