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Right I did enjoy this it was very captivating and had me hooked almost immediately from the start. As soon as i read the part about how she was abused ...

OMG! I read this because the first chapter had me slightly interested by the concept, but this........this has hooked me now dude. I really would like to see how Ali ...

Right i really enjoyed this! It really drew me into the mindset of a cautious, sensible female virgin, also the twist at the end where the boy is an absolute ...

Right I would just like to say I did really enjoy this. You told it really well. I enjoyed the part where she is talking to kids from her bedroom ...

This was an enjoyable little read. I liked the dystopian setting you have managed to construct and how we can see from a inside perspective of this resistance soldier; I'm ...

Ok firstly nice opening line, it had me hooked straight from the start and made me want to continue to read. I liked how you described the way you wanted ...

Right if im totally honest with you I didnt really enjoy this story. I felt that a lot of parts needn't be used as they just seemed to drag and ...

This is an interesting piece. I like how you managed to build up and describe your characters feelings by using their movements and whatnot, you really did manage to pack ...

This is a very interesting start to a novel i would be very interested in reading more of. But I did notice a few mistakes. Firstly, put a comma after ...

I did enjoy reading this, it was a very simply structured piece and the dialogue I really thought was superb. Although I do want to know a little more information ...

Right I did enjoy this. I love reading stories about memories and past feelings, it always manages to intrigue me. First thing I did notice though is that you use ...

I did enjoy this quite a lot and felt that you set a very interesting and curious atmosphere of mystery that people would like to find out more about. I ...

This is a really simple piece of poetry which i did like. All the advice i can give you is make the poem a little longer as there was no ...

I reckon this has potential, as some of the short lines shocked me. IN a good way of course :D I reckon you should string all these lines together into ...

This is a enjoyable little story and a good read but there is a few little points i would like to bring up. For one you didn't have to basically ...