rissymay

I like this idea a lot. I grew to like it more and more as I kept reading... However, the writing is kinda boring. I suggest spicing it up with ...

Perhaps that would be best.

All I can say is that this is awesome. Great job.

I am your worst enemy and greatest friend, Eros. You should know this by now.

This is cool; I like it. If you're planning to do something more with this, you should add a lot of material in the conversation between the leaders and the ...

You did help. Thank you

Thanks for you thoughts on my story. I'm not sure exactly how to show and not tell- could you maybe give me an example of what I should do? Like, ...

Thank you so much for reviewing my story. I also sent this story through email to one of my literature teachers from middle school, and a lot of things you ...

This is a beautiful poem- you did a very good job. There's nothing I think you can do better; this is perfect.

this is so cool!

*whisper* I agree with Judas's review and I think that very good points were made and I'm gonna use that in my own writing thanks bye -rissymay