rishabh

hi pal! welcome! your work is awesome. this thing is mindblowing. u know how it felt when we see humans are fighting for being superior............for me this is rubbish! ur ...

GRT starting ur character's dream of being in lingerie is litle awky....but u mentioned the truth. but i suggest u not to use such type of words. but it's totally ...

"anything else than perfection was a big no no." it should be " anything else than perfection was a big no." ur work is nice.....quite simply understandable. i hven't tried ...

WHOA! A GRT START. U WERE AWESOME. STARTING IS SO NICE THAT IT PULLED ME FURTHER TO READ IT. IT IS UR ALMOST A LAST PART WHICH BLOWS MY HEAD. ...

hey! time for A REVIEW! HAPPY REVIEW DAY! UR STUFF IS NICE! I LIKE UR STUFF! GOING BACK TO STARTING POINT OF THE STORY....I APPRECIATE THAT U STARTED UR THING ...

this stuff is very short, but my friend length doesn't matter! matters most is ur creativity which is outstanding! i liked ur concept. u r pretty awesome in writing such ...

wow a nice simple scientific stuff and a lot of fiction and adventure included. all these inclusions are very good. ur concept was grt. i thought something different but the ...

this stuff is good! ur letter to ryan was awesome........i myself read it twice.....coz i loved it. starting of the letter is so sweet that i wanna read it continously ...

hey! it is a nice stuff and u hv written it wonderfully. i like the teeny effect in ur stuff which made my teenager days revived. i hope i got ...

[It went without a hitch, except when the key-man got to the back, and found the boy who had been whipped a month before. He was lying in the back ...

hmmm...........honestly ur sci fi stuff is mind blowing! i read ur stuff very curiously coz i am studying engineering and i like sci fi stuff [almost]. ur some para are ...

this story goes way to fast! but interesting! some parts i chose for u where i focused cent percent: [Everything is slow motion after that. I see an arrow find ...

ur starting conversion is nice. now about ur stuff............ [Cynthia was pulled from her daydreams, snatched from her world of fantasy where she ruled as queen and back into the ...

sorry i cant review this coz, i don't know this language. it is german, or russian? i am confussed. use english with proper language. i hope u will understand. albeit ...

[“Caden,” my reflection whispers. As she says it, I notice a small defect on her lower right canine tooth. It would be invisible to anyone other than me. I observe ...