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Wow, thank you so much for this review. All the places you pointed out are places that I struggled with finding the right words during writing, so you really helped ...

Thanks for the review!

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Hi EagleFly! I wanted to start off by saying that I absolutely loved your poem! It’s not too often I read humorous poetry so I really enjoyed this. Some lines ...

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Hi EagleFly! I wanted to start off by saying that I absolutely loved your poem! It’s not too often I read humorous poetry so I really enjoyed this. Some lines ...

Thanks so much for this kind review! Word choice is an area I really struggle with, so I appreciate your kind advice. I will be sure to try out your ...

Thanks for this kind and helpful review! I do struggle quite a bit with word choice in this type of fiction, and in writing dialogue so I greatly appreciate your ...

Hello Kanome. Thanks for taking the time to write a review! I understand what you mean about the tone. That is definitely something I am trying to work on- thanks ...

Hi Manilla! Thanks for this review! I respect your opinion, and will think thoroughly about what you wrote.

Thanks for this awesome review, and for the kind welcome! That%u2019s exactly what I was going for, straight forward and powerful. Thanks again!

Thanks for taking the time to write such a detailed, specific review! And thanks for the welcome! About the whole stanza thing... due to a glitch on my phone whenever ...

Thanks for taking time to review this! I definitely see what you mean about line breaks, I%u2019ll be sure to review those. As for the stanza definition, I actually had ...

Of course! I see- that%u2019s a cool author choice! When I relooked at the poem after reading your response, I realized that leaving it disrupting the flow actually kind of ...

Thanks!

Wow! Thanks so much for this great review!

Nice poem! It has a very interesting concept, and made me think in a new way. Nice descriptions, it's very thorough and I really got the picture. I especially enjoyed ...