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Another one of the hilarious poems with unexpected endings! I really like the rhyming schemes.

Wow! This one was really good! My eyes were glued to it till the end, and the last line was completely unexpected. ( Well, not completely, I didn’t see any ...

Hi! This was a hilarious poem, when I started reading it, I thought it would be emotional and a disaster had happened. But I don’t understand why this line was ...

Sorry! I sent this by mistake

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Hi! I really liked this poem and It’s really funny. But, you should add ‘the’ before ‘sun’. Also, you don’t need to write the title again. I look forward to ...

Hi! I am here for a small review, well, I found only one mistake ‘ The entire room was messy; empty bottles of energy drinks and cups of instant noodles ...

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Hi! I am here for a small review, well, I found only one mistake ‘ The entire room was messy; empty bottles of energy drinks and cups of instant noodles ...

Hi! I read this short poem, and I too have a cat, a Persian cat, and he too, starts pouncing and stalking, and all that, and it all starts from ...

Hi! I’m just here for a small review, it’s that I really like this song and I look forward to more of your work! :)

Thank you so much! I will try to improve it, it%u2019s my first poem which I published here, so I%u2019m not as good in these things, thank you for your ...

Hi! I am so confused, when I read this, in the end I just thought that the crows wanted the corn but thought that the scarecrow was a real guard, ...

Hi! I really liked the poem, and especially the way it’s ended, but I think that in the second last line, you can cut out the word ‘so’ , it’s ...

And thank you so much for telling me my mistakes in the poem, I will publish a better, and improvised version of this poem.

Sorry MoonIris, I meant points, as I%u2019m new and I used my 200 points to publish this poem.