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Yes, thanks for pointing that out! To be honest, the relationship that inspired this was great, but the last week was bad enough to end up with this. So you ...

Please spell Dr. as Doctor. His name is Doctor, so you spell it out. You only abbreviate if it's a title. It hurts me to see it abbreviated. And, it ...

Yay! Thanks!

How do I make the editor not eat my indents? Enlighten me, please?

Thanks! I will definitely add those commas. Import is actually a word, it means significance or meaning, but thanks for checking anyways! The eleventh line on is supposed to compare ...

Of course I remember you! Well, if you're as old as your brother I am a few years older than you. How can you tell? Thanks! Diaphenous means gauzy and ...

Okay, thanks. Those are really helpful suggestions which I will definitely change.

Thanks so much for the time you took to review. I'm definitely cutting down to just have "expiration date" as you suggested, I think it's definitely the strongest.

Okay, thanks so much. That was the bit where I was really unsure of it. I liked just having the toys, but I felt like it would be lost on ...

How can you not believe in it?!? Chaos would ensue! Everyone would kill everyone else. I just don't understand!

Did you read the scriptures that I earlier referenced? Because I'm pretty sure that those are the exact opposite of perfect and infallible. Esp. Judges 19:25-28.

The fact that the bible has proof that says its wrong still fails to explain why everyone should be affected by the bible, regardless of their religion. Have you ever ...

The scripture I referenced is different, has to do with how women shalt never teach or be of any sort of authority over man "she must be quiet". I brought ...

Okay, and that's good. The thing is, we change whether or not these scriptures are "an example" or "a warning" depending on the time period, and everyone believes different things. ...