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Okay, thanks!

Thanks, this is really helpful. You pointed out some things that I didn't really even think of, so I appreciate that. I've tried playing around with indentations in the past, ...

Aww, thanks so much!

Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it!

You should definitely post them. Rebel against the system! I HATE when people seem to think it needs to be strictly formatted with each line a complete sentence, capitalized and ...

@magpie94, it's supposed to say poets, not pets :P

Well, the descriptions of the eyes were more descriptions of what we were seeing than the actual eyes themselves. And you don't have to end each thought with a period, ...

YAAAAAAY thanks!

Thank you so much!

Wow, you're a really talented lyricist! This is really great, and it's very relatable on a personal level to me, which makes me love it more. I have no criticism, ...

Thanks! Yeah, the second was meant to be a little sadder, but that one stanza is still undecided, I kinda got stuck on it. I think I will add the ...

Thanks!

No, go ahead and post it again, I don't mind. As for capitalization and all that, they tell you not to review based on that because it is entirely subjective ...

I'm really glad that you liked it, and so happy that it could inspire you! Thank you, that's probably the best compliment a writer could get, that their writing is ...

Thanks!