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I bet the poets whose poems you comment on with nothing but capitalization and punctuation nitpicks are just as tired of you saying it as you are. Poetry is an ...

Thank you kindly :) I tried changing the first stanza around accordingly, and adding more enjambment. If you get the chance to read back over it, I'd love to know ...

I'm not 100% sure what it was with the suddenly. I guess scavenger gave me the sense that she lived off of looking for something to lust over, so it ...

ooh reviews from you are always such a welcome treat. Yessss, I have the same hatred of untitled s, it was purely laziness, but I didn't think to give it ...

Ho-ly crap. That's all for now. If I can manage to come up with anything significant enough to be considered as a review, I'll return. But wow.

Ahhh I'm so glad you liked it! I tweaked and added accordingly, hopefully it's an improvement.

Oh gosh, mag, this was great. Thank you so much. I think you showing me the chop away process was just what I needed to get into the mindset of ...

thanks so much!

you are absolutely wrong to say that all poem lines need to start with a capital, I'd love to see the magic rule of poetry that says "thou shalt start ...

thanks! Oh, autotonomy is sort of a hard word to find, it's the word for the process by which some organisms bodies cut of a body part for their own ...

Did you just?..You just did.

Thanks, I fixed it up! You were super helpful as per norm :)

fortis, I'm actually glad you had to reread the "not fond twinge" part, it was supposed to confuse you slightly. The entire poem is supposed to almost seem like a ...

Writer, Thanks as always for the lovely review! I added that semi-colon where you mentioned it (do you know how excited I was to hear you reccommend the use of ...

Hey, you, I see quite a few technically nitpicks so I'll come give you a full review later. As for now, good job on this.