rhiasofia

Hello, Rhia here to review! I don't usually do novels, but I figured I could at least give my editing expertise, try to clear out the green room. One little ...

Hello, Rhia here to review. First off, applause is due for the ending. *applauds*. Very clever, I like what you did there! Moving on. Just a few nitpicks first. They're ...

Hey there, Rhia here to review. First off, maybe you already know this, but I'll share just because I wish someone had told me earlier, to get rid of double ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! Well, I've never lived in Scotland, I'm so very American (sadly), but with a very large hunk of Scottish heritage, I can relate at least ...

Hey retro, rhia here to review! I'm gong to nitpick a few little things first: "Lock and load *its* time to go," *it's "mascara *run* and bloody snow." I could ...

Hello, Delirium, and welcome to YWS! Rhia here to review. Wow, I really like this! I absolutely love what you've done with the rhyme scheme and the beat. It's very ...

Hey ConverseFireGirl! Rhia here to review. This is really well written, and I love the imagery. I'll nitpick a few little things first: "Paths woven like Indian rugs on dusty ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! First off, welcome to YWS, hope you like it so far. Wow. This is really interesting! It's really thought-provoking and interesting, and very well written. ...

Hello RavenMoonStone, Rhia here to review as requested. I agree with WallFlower's recommendation that you separate these into 4-line stanzas. That would make it all much cleaner and smoother flowing. ...

Hello, rhia here to review. This is really cute, and so true. You do have a few spelling errors though, which I will point out to you. "The lights from ...

Hello, Liaya! Rhia here to review. Wow, what stunning imagery! You wrote really beautifully, and really captured something marvelous. I've always loved mythology, and this style and subject reminded m

Hey Purple, Rhia here to review. I'm sorry this went so long unreviewed, I didn't notice it was up! I feel bad, so here I go. As per norm, Nitpicks ...

Hello there, rhia here to review this poem. I am going to perform my editorial habits and point out every little grammar and spelling error I can find in this ...

Hey fortis, Rhia here to review! This is so interesting and cute. Short and sweet, too, gotta love that. I love the moon, which drew me to read this, and ...

Hello, Rhia here to review. Ooh, I really like the clever play on words, and the repetition of that stanza. I loved the series of unfortunate events, and I think ...