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Re: Innocent Criminals
Hello I Really Like This Poem. I Was Different, very different but a good different. I Think Alot Of People Will Read Just Because Of The Title. It Catches People ...
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Re: Boobs
Lol. I Thought That This Was Funny! You Really Had People Thinking That You Was Going To Say Something That Was Deep About When You Really Didn't. But Since I ...
Mar 8, 2013 -
Re: A Snowy Evening With The Prostitues Outside Lavery's Bar
I like this. I is really different. But a good different. You Should Right More. Just know i would read them. I really wonder how people come up with up ...
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Re: Desires
Heey , This was actually pretty good for it being you first poem. When you said it was you first poem i was like this might actually be a bad ...
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Re: Just a haiku
Well to be honesty i think you could have done better. I'm just saying that because haiku's are suppose to make you think but then again not make you think. ...
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Re: What's Unseen By Many
You Are A Really Good Writer ! You Have NO Mistakes And That Is Hard To Do . So This Must Have Took You A Long Time To Do ! ...
Mar 8, 2013
