retrodisco666

Hello, Is mary ann dying or something because that's what it seems. I think this is quite good and it has a small sweet feel. Good. ~Retro Disco666

I love it, really love it. Amazing, well done! write more of these! ~Retro Disco666

I really liked this, which is rare because this genre isn't really for me.. Great job ~Retro Disco666

I really like this. I read it because of your user name. I love him. I think it needs renaming because it isn't Really catchy. But other than that. Love ...

That is amazing. The use of repetitiveness is used really well. a solid piece.

Good quite good. My only point would be, is that the first stanza doesn't feel like a first stanza. It doesn't really seem to have a hook, maybe it's just ...

It's good but needs work. Like nova said it has very little written. I think you have the write concept and with a little work, could become a good love ...

Again i stand by everything i have put on my review of the first chapter. Read that and see where it takes you.

It's good, however i feel that the rhyming feels forced, but that may just be me.

The Dresden files. It's a series of books. To give you an idea, it basically fantasy meets crime fiction. I would seriously recomend. They are by Jim Butcher

I agree with you. I think it should be put into a hole and be forgotten about personally.

This book has one of my favourite characters of all time. Curlys wife. She is so complex. I think and every part she is in, it gets better and has ...

LOVE IT! it's sick, which makes it work. I have one small suggestion, i think that it needs mabye one more line after the end. Maybe like a response to ...

It kinda has, thanks. And i do read poetry alot. I am published in fact. Sorry that sounded snappy. I'm actually scared to write now, but thanks.

Intresting but very effective. Good