resonance

It's profound and overall very good. Yet, if you try using similar diction and the same concept but have the narrator speaking to him/herself, the reader would be more drawn ...

The intense imagery successfully portrays the profundity of the narrator's state of mind. It pin-points the feelings of "despair and loss" and causes the reader to experience these emotions first-hand

The concept of a support-group for clones is absolutely fantastic! And the presence of the "doctors" makes me think that there has to be a full-sized sci-fy story beyond this ...

The concept of a support-group for clones is absolutely fantastic! And the presence of the "doctors" makes me think that there has to be a full-sized sci-fy story beyond this ...

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I'm not a big fan of free-style pros, but you might have just changed my mind! The tone fits the psychology of the narrator, and it raises interesting questions about ...