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I agree with the first guy on corrections in grammar. Other than that, WOW veryyy niccce! It made me stop everything I was doing and focus all my attention on ...

[quote="niccinic15"]Solemn faces often found, Your lips move but make no sound. Piercing silence fills my ears When Death comes to prove my fears. The soul to take is way too ...

I really liked this poem! And your rhyming scheme! It was so good(:! But, these lines threw me off a little bit: The government, with rules so lame? Or is ...

"Beautiful personalities brought down,By discouragement, sorrow and grief,Millions of future leaders faded away,Only a handful makes it through with relief" These are my favorite lines! You did a grea

But the cold tile on your feetAwoke the memories of deceit That was the only line that kind of threw me off. Other than that *clapsverrrryloud* well done(:. This is ...

THIS IS SO GOOD. I could picture the music, the bursts, the blossoms the bliss. This is so very good and discriptive, your amazing. This is a poem I could ...

This is so touching and it grasped my heart and brought tears to my eyes. You are really good. And your only 15?! Your spectacular, and your writing is so ...

"I'll chase your soul like a shadow" "I want to burn beside you You're white like me And I'll follow you forever" I love these lines, they are very detailed ...

I do like this. It's very different, and your rhythm and use of words are hard to follow, which I think that's how it should be. I like the message ...

Hey chickah! It's me your homie rememberme? haha no foreal remember me?! lol. Okay so I really like this poem I like how its layed out and spaced out, but ...

this poem is very unique and touching. I always used to write poems like this, and I can relate to you, and If you did write this from a personal ...

This is really good. It is unique and I can't quite tell you how, so sorry about that. All I know is that, if you wanted to you could make ...

This is so good! I love the details and discription you put into this, I would love to read some more sometime this is just breathtaking. You worked hard on ...

This is beautiful, and sad at the same time. It almost makes me want to cry, and it makes me feel so grateful that I can see. You described how ...

I like this poem. I dont know if you wrote this from a personal experience, but it's short and sweet and get's to the point. It's not one of those ...