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I know it is "three idiots" right? I never mentioned the cliched part because I knew this is gonna be exactly that when I read the first few lines :P

I know it is "three idiots" right? I never mentioned the cliched part because I knew this is gonna be exactly that when I read the first few lines :P

thanks for the amazing feedback :D

yes my friend, I think I mentioned it in the lines "what if we were all busy doing something, that made our lives worthwhile" , but yeah I get what ...

thank you :P I am glad you enjoyed it.

haha yeah, river indeed. I was thinking too grand maybe. But yeah, river makes more sense. Thanks a lot. :)

Hey. Thanks a ton for the elaborate review. I have to say the repetition is totally intentional. But I surely will work on my punctuation. Thanks again.

French, nice. Adds a bit of style to it. In first few lines 'as' has been used quite too often. Space the words more carefully. It was a nice read. ...

what did I just read? Hah. Well anyway if I had to point out something I would point you to the lack of proper punctuation. Some other minor mistakes like ...

Thats some dark poem. I have always wanted to write one but so far in vain. I liked it a lot even though I do have a thing for poems ...

thanks roxy :P capital letters, all right :)

hey thanks :) the review is much appreciated.

thanks :)

this is nice.