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Hey, I like this! It's really strong. I can feel how sad he his- it kinda makes me feel depressed... :D great job! I don't really have anything that I ...

This is awesome! It was really interesting to read the whole time through- I never really got bored or confused. I love the ending, and basically the whole thing. :D ...

Wow, I really like this! It was really simple yet powerful. I love these lines: She was flawless to the eye What seemed to be a complex flower No one ...

Wow, I really liked this. I agree that you should go a little slower with the whole romantic thing, so it makes people keep reading. Also, don't make Angel seem ...

This was so sweet! (kinda what the other reviewer said, but whatever) I loved reading it. Especially your ending lines. There's nothing I really think you need to change- keep ...

This was awesome! It was really powerful and I could feel the love. At first I didn't think the ipod fit in with the rest, but then near the end ...

Wow, this was awesome! I loved everything. The descriptions were really good- I could really clearly see everything happening. I agree that you need to resolve more things; I don't ...

Wow, this is really good. I read it really fast because I wanted to know what happened at the end. WHAT HAPPENS?? AH! I HAVE TO KNOW! Sorry. This is ...

Wow, this was so awesome! I loved reading it, there weren't any parts that I didn't like. It was really fun to read; I love stories about crazy people. I ...

This is good! I enjoyed reading it. I love the way you describe her eating the pomegranate. I don't really have any nitpicks, unless they're the same as the reviewer ...

First of all, I just want to say that this is really good. I love how intense it is from the very beginning, how it just jumps right into the ...

Wow, this is good! It's mysterious and dark and... basically what the other reviewer said. :D Anyways, it's awesome! Sorry, but I have no nitpicks. I'm a terrible review, but ...

Awesome! I love Petah, and how annoying he is. I can so see him in my head right now! :D I think you should add what Maria is thinking, when ...

Wow, this is really good! I love the idea. I was hooked the whole time, and never wanted to stop reading. Great job! I love how you have her reading ...

I was a little confused about what was happening at the beginning of this, but then most of it cleared up. I agree that you should switch the whole thing ...