reaganpark

This awesome story was so awesome that I can't stop thinking about how awesome it was! Literally, awesomeness just exploded out of the computer screen the whole time I was ...

Oh my gosh, I love this! It's scary and really funny at the same time. I love how you make the reader feel condemned and yet make it exciting, almost ...

This is good! I don't normally read a lot of poetry, but your title drew me in. :D I love how simple this is, yet powerful and filled with emotion. ...

Wow, this is really good! I literally almost cried at the end! I have no nitpicks, since I don't like doing grammar. Great job, and now I'm going to go ...

Hey, This is amazing! I love the way you described everything. It was like I could see it happening in my head. I was kinda confused at the beginning, at ...

Oh my gosh! I love this!!!!!!!! I was laughing through the whole thing. This makes me want to plan my own Gatorade fight. If your boyfriend never wears anything but ...

Hi! I just want to say that I think this is really good! I love this sentence: I dance in the park when people are watching (fine, attempt to). But ...

Wow, I really like this! I love how you show that it affected you, and how you and your family enjoyed it together. I laughed when I read this, I ...

Sorry, this is going to be really short. But I just wanted to say that I loved this! I like how honest you were, and blunt about the way you ...

Wow, this is good! I was a little confused at the beginning, but as I read on I understood. I love how intense it is, how it starts out right ...

OH MY GOSH! I just read through this whole thing, I would've reviewed something but I didn't want to stop. This is sooo good! I love how you go back ...

This is good, and I agree that you could turn it into a novel. It feels like it's missing a lot of information, which might be easier to add if ...

Nice job! I really liked this. The idea is cool and I like where you put your line breaks. I agree that grammar is your only problem, but it's not ...

Wow, this is good. It really made me think about independence day and what it's about. I love fireworks, but you're making me rethink them! :( Awesome poem- I loved ...

Growth, change, strength, beauty All of which I no longer grasp A pill containing the reality I fear Passes my lips, kills all my hope Leaves mere memories to mourn ...