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  • Snow

    Snow falls hard onto the cold ground on which a lone man lies down, waiting for death. It is so cold that his blood seems to freeze, no matter the ...

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  • Snow-revised and more better!

    I posted this story a while ago, but now it's edited. Thanks for readin'! ------------ A lone man lies on the ground, straining to keep alive. It is so cold ...

    5 min read
  • The Quest

    It's pretty good stuff. I noticed you tend to use the past perfect tense a lot (at least I think that's what it's called). For example, where you say "had ...

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  • Valentine's Day (edited)

    To call you, Just to say sorry. Forgive me, In return for a smile. Maybe you can hug me, Or give a kiss. I wouldn’t mind. Stay friends? I wouldn’t ...

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  • Mark the Eyes

    Mark the eyes. They tell all. They can be deceiving, Or believing, And you must listen. They are truth. They do not lie. If they see the sky, They also ...

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  • Fear

    “Why are you scared?” he said to her. “Why are you scared? Why not just take the risk?” “I don’t want to tell you.” “Why?” The man is impatient. There ...

    6 min read
  • Weather

    Think dirty when you read this...haha....... ____________________________________________ Stay inside with me. We can watch the weather change. From this safe view we can decide: Warm it up or cool it

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  • The Warrior

    The warrior hunts. He exists solely because he must exist. He fights because that is his purpose. He may never know rest, but the torment that he brings to evil ...

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  • The Journal of Me (workin title) - Chapter 1

    Chapter One “There is a ghost haunting my inn,” the innkeeper, whose name was Forg, said. I looked at him, and then back at Gordon, who looked as confused as ...

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  • The Journal of Me (workin title) - Chapter 2

    Thanks for reading!!! Check out the first chapter too (if you want). Here's a link : viewtopic.php?t=17263 Chapter 2 The best way to find work, especially in a town such ...

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  • Laughing on the Outside

    Dear Sir Jim, I’m writing this to you, Jimmy, so you know the ending to my story. You’ll never see me again, although you might hear of me on the ...

    11 min read
  • Scavenger Hunt

    The pine tree’s interweaving branches that made the dark forest’s canopy failed in their challenge to block all light as some remnants from the moon reflected sunlight managed to seep ...

    37 min read
  • Boulders

    Jonathon Stachem woke up slowly, eyes red. Too much grass last night, he thought. He closed his eyes, attempting to return to a quite wonderful dream that involved several women ...

    11 min read
  • Corporate Holdings

    It was so cold that I was convinced that the air around me had a strong desire to kill me; it was almost painful to breathe. I even got my ...

    18 min read
  • Corporate Holdings part 2

    Thanks for the reviews to the first one! This is the middle part. Ending will be up tomorrow. Thanks again!!! _________________________________- The news camera hovered in front of my face, ...

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