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Re: Chapter Five
You really improved on your dialogue!! I love how fast-paced and emotional your story is. I find the use of magic and races really interesting and fun. You did an ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: Squirming Worms | Poem
yes, that's exactly what I was going for with the POV switch, you nailed it! the gif is from a movie called the goldfinch, and I was inspired by it's ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Squirming Worms | Poem
thank you for the suggestions, my rhyming was all over the place! I think I wanted this poem to be more introspective and reflective rather than scary, but that's interesting ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Squirming Worms | Poem
thank you !
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Slave Girl: Chapter 1.2
yes please!!
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Slave Girl: Chapter 1.2
yes please!!
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Squirming Worms | Poem
thank you for taking the time to write this for me. I think some of it is just how I wanted it to be interpreted, like switching to first person ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Squirming Worms | Poem
thank you so much !! I really appreciate the support :))
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: The Demon Lord and His Empty Heaven
Thanks for the tips, I'll keep them in mind!
May 26, 2020 -
Re: Chapter Four
That totally makes sense, I like that idea a lot!
May 26, 2020 -
Re: D&D 1
This is really cool! I've been wanting to play D&D for a few years now, especially after I saw some playthroughs online. I love the imagery and creativity of your ...
May 26, 2020 -
Re: The Demon Lord and His Empty Heaven
thank you for the comment! This post is a little confusing because it's the start of the sequel to my first published work, Accursed Red. It's missing that context, so ...
May 26, 2020
