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Welcome!

Thanks you so much! XD Most of the people didn't read the revised, which I understand, but it was really nice of you to! Thank you so much! ~racket

Thanks for the review! Yeah, it was supposed to be a bit vague. But thanks!

Your welcome! Just remember; the message of the poem is more important than the rhyme scheme. But you did a really good job!

Thanks!

Hmm... I'll think about it... But thanks!

Yeah, I think she kept it growing and all its predecessors until she grew up. Thanks for the review! Anything this short story needs help with?

Thanks! Yeah, I couldn't think of another word to describe 'water' 'cause I was using it so much, but thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Yes, you have! I see where you're getting all of this... I was hoping the poem would convey the different stages of the day, and how it progresses. But, yes, ...

Thanks! XD I was laying on my floor when I wrote this, just like, 'I do not want to move...' XD Thanks again!

Thanks! And yes, I do feel better now. XD I like your bible verse, thanks for putting that in there at the bottom.

XD I'm better now, thanks! And yes, thanks for the awesome review! I feel so flattered...

Dang. XD Sweet analyses! You sound so smart... Thanks, I guess! Do you have any suggestions for it? Or is it okay?

Ah, okay. Thanks!

XD You're welcome!