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Re: No longer near the surface
Woah. Ok, this is a deep poem. I really like the chain-reaction thing going on here. This is really well done, but I have a few suggestions. Firstly, I believe ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: If my lashes flutter will I fall apart?
Hello Emilie! Racket here to review your literature! First off, I really love this poem. It is artistic and beautiful and the meaning is fairly clear. One thing that kind ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Don't ask me what time it is, I've forgotten
Hello rhiasofia, Racket here to review this marvelous poem. I really love this poem. There is a sophistication that I don't believe I could ever achieve. Your meaning is so ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Cold hearted.
Hello there, dogsrule5! Racket, here to review this wonderful piece of literature! First off, I would like to tell you I enjoyed reading your poem, and I don't want to ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Dear Lord (It's Worth It To Me)
Hi there, Racket to review your wonderful work. I really enjoyed reading this poem; it points out many things I wonder myself and things I've wished there were answers for. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Sipping Orange Juice
Hello there, Racket here to review this confusing poem! I really enjoyed the idea of this poem. It is confusing in a poetic way that I love. I love it ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Poems are Meant to be Silly
I love this! It's short and sweet with wonderful rhyming! I like that all the first letters of each line is capitalized (lots of people make the mistake of not ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: The 'blues' of traveling
Racket is here to review your literature. This is exactly what traveling is like, in my opinion, whether by car, bus train, airplane, this is exactly what it feels like. ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Why I believe in God.
Racket, here to review your marvelous, amazing, perfect poem. I'm going to repeat that: ...marvelous, amazing, perfect poem. Dude, this is awesome! It is so straightforward, it tells you the ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Burning Wings
Racket, here to review. I really like this song/poem. This has multiple memorable lines throughout. I really like that last line. It seems to me that you are amazing at ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Droplets
This is a delightful little poem! I believe this is one of your better works. I especially love the little line of humor in the middle of seriousness: And other ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Sometimes I wonder.
Racket, here to review your work! I especially love the last line of your poem, very.....very, hmm....controversial to the title? I mean, it is not really, but it feels slightly ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Snowman
This is an interesting poem. I like the sound of it, but the subject does not seem appropriately chosen. Snowmen are supposed to be symbols of joy for one's house. ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: thing
I like this. There are a couple grammatical mistakes here and there, so maybe a little proofreading from thee will help out. One thing that confused me was that the ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Ick, Spiders!
This is a very good work, though I have noticed some errors mainly in the beginning of the story. Now, i agree with @defyingravity01 about a couple things. What needed ...
Dec 29, 2013
