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queerelves

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Through the Fire

    It looks like you're pretty new to YWS, so hello ^-^ This was a quick, enjoyable read, and you have a writing style that I can foresee developing into something ...

    Aug 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Just a Player

    Hey! It looks like this is your first piece, so welcome to YWS; hopefully you're enjoying it so far. I'm going to break down my review into different sections, which ...

    Jul 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Spiritual Re: Temptations of the good man

    Hello ^-^ I'm a big fan of poems about personal struggles (that seems to be the only type of poetry I write xP), and I think you did a great ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: REDACTED

    Hello ^-^ I'll be trying out a new "reviewing style" here. I'll list the strengths and weaknesses of the piece, and then give my personal opinion on it. So, here ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: 1

    Hey! As requested, I'm here to review the fencing/dueling in your chapter ^~^ To start off, here are some websites I used for reference. In places, I quote these websites/paraphrase ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A work in progress

    Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review I enjoyed reading this piece, and I liked the message. Like your other pieces, it's passionate and emotional. I don't have too much ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: #

    Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review This poem has a lot of passion behind it, a lot of emotion. And those are the best kinds of poems. It's evident ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Genesis

    Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review This was a fabulous story, and I really enjoyed reading it. I regret not reading it sooner :P The plot and the theme ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Another Truth: Our friends

    Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review First of all, welcome to YWS! You're a fantastic poet

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Sunday Night

    Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review Let me say, I really enjoyed reading this. I love the tone, the mood, the meaning. It was fantastic, and you're a fabulous ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Mirrors

    Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review Wow. Wow, this is a very powerful piece. It's honest, it's powerful, it's meaningful. You have my complete admiration. I'm not sure if ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Broken wings prologue

    Hello! ^^ Seb here for a review This is a very emotional piece. Your characters have a lot of strong feelings, and their narration shows that clearly. You have two ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Intimacy

    Hello ^^ Seb here for a review I really enjoyed reading your piece. It was short and simple, but it was... I'm having trouble finding the right word, but it ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Chelsea's Friends (sneak peek into first chapter, let me know how it is.)

    Hello ^^ Seb here for a review Oh man, I really enjoyed reading this! I love the story, I love the characters, and I love where it seems to be ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Stabbing Mannequins Is So 2005

    Hello ^^ Seb here for a review Reviewing songs most definitely isn't my strong suit, but I'll give it a shot. When I was reading this piece, I was a ...

    May 25, 2014


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