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Re: Invisible
Hi! Well, I really liked this. It was well written. I think the second stanza would fit best for the first, if that is what you were asking? "Cuz no ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: The last time: (May contain refrence to death)
Hey! Haven't reviewed in a while and I'm still new so sorry if I'm not helpful. I really liked this, most of my poems are about this topic. I thought ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: the reason behind how i act this way with you
Great poem! I know everyone is pointing this out but I think you meant to say "despise" not "despite". It's really cool how you are able to portray the emotion ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: His Love For Lady Adrienne
I liked the poem although, I think there were a few things you could fix or whatever. I think you should draw i the reader in more in the first ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Christmas heartbreak
I think that you should draw the reader in more in the first line. I know I'm not good at that but it would be better so that way the ...
Dec 22, 2010