purpleandblue22

WOW! I decided to review one of your chapters after you put all that time into SaS, and not only have I nothing what so ever to critique, but I ...

Hey! Here for my review! I love how by the end of the first paragraph, I was already slightly attatched to the charectors. “Good Lord, Isabella,” Giorgio (who had preferred ...

Again, you failed to dissapoint! I searched through it and I couldn't find anything wrong with it. I'm just wondering, who is Roxanne? I might have just missed reading about ...

Hi! I'm guessing this is an exerpt. Well, it worked. I really want to know what is going on in your book now :D . I saw no major gramatical ...

Hey! I like your poem, it has an interesting topic. I can't explain why though, but I feel like it runs slow (I really would explain why, but when I ...

Hi! Here to do some reviewing. First off, really good. I'm getting a hint of what is going to happen later and I'm curious about it. Kadalo was a tribe ...

Hey, reviewing time! I saw no issues, except the odd enters every once and a while. This was beautifully written, plain and simple. I don't know why, but the ending ...

Hahahaha! I loved that! I'm a monster Harry Potter fan, and this did it justice. He told me where he went! Him and my uncle Ron and aunt Hermione went ...

Hey! Here to review! I love the emotion in this piece. I can litterally feel the anger comming off the computer screen. You only wanted you r perfect son, but ...

Chapter One: “All glory comes from daring to begin” –Eugene F. Ware Present Day: August 24th Setting: Chiyoda-ku, Tokyo, Japan The night shadows covered the boy as he slipped into ...

Hey! Here for a review! I'm clutching my head between my hands, the horrible headache denying me of thinking. A sickening feeling shakes me as I vomit- again, according to ...

I have never been a patriotic person, but this poem made me want to be. You had good immigry with very few words. I don't see anything that really needs ...

Hey! Here for reviewing! The presence was strong. It was a young woman and she was troubled and afraid. He wanted to reach out and help her, but she was ...

Hey! Here to review! I haven't read the ealier chapters, so if I say something that makes no sence compared to what you already wrote, please ignore it. The man—nay, ...

"I won't let go until you surrender!" "Can you at the very least get off, you're crushing me!" "Not until you surrender, Simon!" "Maria!" Maria simply laughed at her captive. ...