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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Floating

    Hey! Pudin here for your review Nutty!! So I like the topic, how you talked about and described it. It's very pleasing, well done. But I think your line breaks ...

    Nov 23, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Wire Hearts and Paper Dreams (1)

    Nutty, hey!! So I'm finally here for the review. First. I loved it, loved your style and description. You didn't give out the whole story but still gave us something ...

    Nov 23, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Smash Bros. New Adventure Story (1st edition)

    Hey Fruitbasket!! First of all, I gotta tell you that I've never heard of that game before. My huge bad!! So let's begin. This is a very decen piece. The ...

    Nov 23, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Scarlet Ibis (revised)

    Kamy!! I'm so sorry I got here so late, I have to check my WWRFF thread more often. But here I go. So, first of all. I really like your ...

    Nov 21, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Ch. 1.2)

    Hey airbear! Pudin here with the review! I'm not feeling nitpicky now so here I go. Well, I loved this, very intriguing and well made. I like how you structurize ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A True Friend

    Hey again!! This one was better than the last one, but I still think that you have a lot more to know about poetry. First. again, your wording. Try to ...

    Oct 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forever and Ever

    Oh my God!! What's this supposed to be? First of all: I don't know if I'm really sorry to say this, but this is awfully childish and immature. and I ...

    Oct 25, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Strange Love III-The butterfly effect

    Hey Young Gun!! Sorry for the delay, but here I am now!! First of all, I have got to say, that I loved it. I liked how you dealt with ...

    Oct 24, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lottie (No Definite Title Yet; PG-13 for Swearing)

    Hello!! Pudin here with the requested review. So, let's start. To be honest, I didn't understand it which leads to the conclusion that I quite don't like it. Why? Because ...

    Oct 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Ch. 1.1)

    Hello again airbear!! Here is your second review. First of all, this was very beautiful. Your description was excellent, you gave us such a clear image that it seemed almost ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Prologue)

    Hey airbear!! First of all, i would like to say I'm sorry for such delay! But I enjoyed this. Wow, it was what I really needed. This was incredible very ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Real World - Prologue

    Hello!! Pudin with the review as requested. So, this was very short even for a prologue, but... there has been prologues this short before so don't worry. But even for ...

    Oct 18, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Meetings, New Lords, and Well-Worn Swords

    Hey Pudin here as requested!! Well, first of all your title is really cool, It cathes the eye. Now for your first paragraphs. To be honest, I liked them, but ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Couldn't Put Humpty Together Again

    Hey Frozen! Pudin here to review!! So let's do the positive first. The poem was very beautiful, at least I liked it. If you put real attention to what the ...

    Oct 15, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love Sucks (Edited+Expanded)

    Hey MO.!! Pudin here as requested! So I like your story a lot let me tell you. Iy is just so modern and it talks about teenagers and stuff like ...

    Oct 13, 2009


One of the things I love about YWS is the quote generator. For example, I'm reading a really serious work, and then I see "Moo. - cow" at the bottom of the page.
— Darlet