pudin.junidf

Hey Ash! What's up? I liked your piece, It is beautiful and...epic, really epic! As Demi said, you were setting the background and the important information for your story Let ...

Hey GAM! What's up? So this piece is a lot better, maybe because you let us into the character's mind and feel what they were feeling. I liked the starting, ...

Hey Eternally confused! I'll review your piece today. So, I don't know what to say, really. It was...good in it's own way. I mean you managed to surprise us, I ...

Hey Underwater! This is good and it has a lot of potential but I think it can still be worked on. I really liked how you portrayed every feeling and ...

Hey Carly! I'll review your story today! So nice story, I liked it. I'm a vampire freak so yeah, loved it.Actually I loved what the story might be. I feel ...

hey Kat! Pudin here again. So I liked this part much more than the first although the word like is not the one I was looking for. I think this ...

Hey Kat! So I have to say I like the idea of the story, the concept and how you wrote. I love your style, how it is written simple and ...

Hey Gam! I'll review your story today! First of all, I have to say that I think this had potential but it seems as if you just wrote the first ...

Hey Katey! I'll review your story today. So, first of all I have to say I loved it! I loved the pace, the characters, the description. I have to say ...

hey Jakfelix! I'll review your piece today. So, first thing I noticed, your hook., meaning the first sentence. To be honest, it didn't quite catch my attention nor made me ...

hey chunkycrayons! Pudin is here to review. I haven't review in a while so, I think I might be a little inexperienced but here i go. first of all, I ...

Hey, Fox! I'm finally here with the review! So, as I've said before I really like your style for you can write almost about anything and still pull it off ...

Forest... I absolutely... loved it!! But let's review it. So I like it's simplicity. You kept it simple, with easy words, but still strong and touching. The topic of the ...

Hey! I'm so sorry I took so long to review this but now I'm here. So first of all, wow! I don't know what to say. The poem is incredibly ...

JD!! I'm so sorry, my computer went nuts yesterday, but here i am now. So, I loved your story, the topic was very sentimental, very sad and moving but let's ...