pudin.junidf

Hey Shine! I'll review your story today. Nice storyline, really nice you've got an interesting idea going on here. Maybe if you expand it a bit more and give us ...

Hey Spiral! I'm here again. To be honest I didn't like this one as much as I liked the other one. This one seemed pretty dull and quite useless. I ...

hey Dark Spiral! I'll review this today! To be honest, I liked it, your writing is pretty good. Unfortunately I haven't read the original, unedited piece so I can't really ...

Hey Little Pet! I loved your story, you have an amazing talent, I loved how you placed everything in the story and how you described it, but I love the ...

Hey Redford!!! Nice storyline, really nice. To be honest, I'm not a big fan of spy or police-murder stories, but this one seems acceptable so I'd really like to keep ...

Hey Randomer! First of all I have to say, bravo! You have real talent, I remember when I was thirteen and started writing and believe me, I was nowhere close ...

Hey Loveless!! I'll review this today! well, to be honest, this was not original and definitely not something that I would ahve wanted to read. Why? Because is not new, ...

Hey JS! I'll review your piece today! I love it, I really like your concept, your idea, your style. It is really nice how you developed this piece from a ...

Hey telle! what's up? So the story was really cute and charming. I liked the characters,how you states them. I really like how you began the story and your style ...

hey Zoe! I'll review your piece today. To be honest, as sick as that might seem, I loved it. It was really well written and you portrayed all her feelings ...

Hey Horselover! I'll review your piece again. So, what I like about your pieces is the intrigue that you create around that voice and how interesting it seems for the ...

hey! I'll review your piece today. It was nice, a good start I have to say. The intrigue that you created around the voice was really nice, it keeps us ...

Hey Kat! What's up? So I don't have much to say now. But I think this piece is lacking a bit of characterization. The piece is short, yeah, but it ...

Hey Zoray! I'll review your piece today. Well, there's a lot of work to do in this piece. First of all, I think the story itself is not that interesting. ...

Hey Aqua! I'll review your piece today. So...this is really well written and interesting. I like the originality of the piece and how you managed to keep the reader's attention ...