pudin.junidf

Hi Pretty Crazy! I'll review this today! Well, this was so very cute! I loved it. It has great potential, and it was nicely developed. I like your style, which ...

Hi Alenka! I'll review this today! I' have to say that you have some interesting ideas going on but the problem was that they weren't well developed. The whole darkness ...

Hey Gal! So, I'm here, finally! So, first of all I have to say that your poetry is exquisite and you have a great talent. I like this poem, I ...

Hey Matt! I'll review your poem today! I have to admit I'm a little rusty on poetry but here I go. This is good, your rhythm is good. If I ...

Hey Kit! I'll review this today! First of all, I have to say bravo! I liked it, even when there were part that were confusing. Well not your fault.lol. So ...

Hey Radid! I'll review this today! I'll point out some things I noticed. 1. Your hook it's quite interesting because it begins with dialogue but the story just went from ...

Hey Lydia! Well, I have to say that this was god, well written, I didn't read the unedited post so I can't really see the changes and improvements but I ...

Hey ofir! I'll review your story today! So here I go! Well, I have to say I liked it, I liked your hook. Those first too sentences really did make ...

Hey Drago! I'll review your story today! Well, I have to say that this was too short, but it was ok. I liked how you kept it mysterious and kept ...

Hey Anchees! I'll review your story today. First of all, I have to say that I really liked it. I liked the story itself, I mean the structure and the ...

Hi Dazzle! I'll review your story today. Well, first of all I have to say that it was an interesting piece, It's a very nice start for the story. IN ...

Hey Rain! I'll review your story today! Well, I have to say that this was, by far, the mos interesting story I've read in a long while and to be ...

Hey Kate! I'll review your story today! So wow! this was short! To be honest it was almost too short to do a proper review due the lack of in-depth ...

Hey Molly! I'll be your reviewer today! So let's begin. First of all, I have to say that you have some great talent going on. I really like your style ...

Hey Princess! I'll review your story today! So, first of all I have to say that this is pretty small, and that's kinda obvious isn't it? This is a setback ...