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HAHAHA!!!!! I love this twilight parodies, they're the best. This one was sick, I totally loved it. I can't review, i'ts was way tooo funny to check any mistakes or ...

You have an outstanding imagination. I read your other story and both of them are beautifully written. In this one, though, i felt that things happened tooo fast. And I ...

I liked it. I really like this fantasy stories they have that mistery and suspense around the whole fantay world. Second. is this all? because it is really good.just some ...

Umm...I liked it, but...bit wakward. I think everyine has told you the same thing about the whip, but i have to say it too. What's with the whip and knife? ...

I liked it. But the principal character, bella, is such an idiot, she's always like "you die I die, you live I live." And she's so sexually needy, she talks ...

Hi!! I love your description of the place,of the peace that surrounded everything and the silence that reigned over the night. Then how everything changed, was incredible,how suddenly everything came ...

Hi! i really liked the story, is very interesting and fun. I loved the characters. They were different but they somehow complemented each other, i mean sam is allperky while ...

I liked it. intriguig.I love the ending, different unexpected. [list=]"Of course, behind that hippie-like façade, he was also a crossword puzzle freak, and every Saturday, no matter what the weather ...

Very good, and you are good at writing. I relly liked. I liked how you described her memories, her relationshiip with her mother, her concept of her father. really nice. ...

Nice. I really liked it. It's the first chapter and it's great .Magic , quite nice beginning for a novel. And I would like to continue reading. and question, What ...

Hey, pretty good. I'm kind of new too, but your writing is good. It made me want to know more. Is a very interesting stor, i mean the parents decision ...