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Re: Alcohol
So, fist of all, let me understand. The story begins with he man hitting the woman and then the following part talks a bout the man's history, right? If I'm ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: A Cutter's Lullaby
I loved it. Its so emotional and deep. It reallly transmits what the writer is feeling. And your rhyme is pretty good, you really made it work, it adds to ...
Aug 26, 2009 -
Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
Ok,so I read the whole saga God knows how many times. I really liked them and each time I read them I felt like it was the first time I ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Realm of Reflection
Hello, Shina!! it's Pudin intresting idea, I read it today (obviously, I always read things late. lol) I like the idea because it's so very clear and I would like ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Removed
Cool, I really liked it it's different. The whole heaven and hell thing is awesome. Great start, the story was so very interesting. It even made me laugh withtthat archangel ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Young Romance
Hello!! this is a well written piece, it has its flaws but it's a nice beggining. The story was somehow cute but there was very little decription about the characters ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Anorexic Letters
Hey!! This is very sentimental, the words you chose were very simple and yet the poem makes a statement. You described the hard road of a wrong mental image. I ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
OK, so one of the worst books I've read is Eldest(the second book in the inheritance series) and a book that I think only one person knows about it and ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(11)
Hey rascalover!! Pudin's here. I love this chapter it's very interesting especially because I thought Isabella had some other sickness. I liked how you described the events but I think ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Another Day
Hello So this is the first time I review lyrics, it's very kind of new for me. But I liked it,. thre were a few lines that confused me when ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Abuse
Oh, it's so good, your descriptions are awesome. A very well written piece. I didn't understand the part about her mother, though. Was she dead or had sheleft her. And ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: I Promise But I Lie (2)
Hey, I'm Pudin!! I suppose you were talking about the guy Sam met at the movies right? Because as angel said, I'm a bit confused about the characters because Idon't ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Leah Lightning Introduction
Hello!! Pudin here. Review time. What makes you ‘you’ d’you think? I don't understand this first question, but I guess is somthing like this: What makes you you do you ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(10)
OH my God ! I love it, it's so romantic!! This is the first one I read so I don't know much about Gary and Isabella' story. BUt from what ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: You're Not perfect.
Hey Jess!! Mind if I call you that?. Pudin here again. I really love reading your story. JIll's part was unexpected but I liked it. Charlie's reaction on the other ...
Aug 3, 2009
