psudiname

This was pretty good, but certainly not as good as previous chapters. In short, it could be made better by being made more clear. I was struggling to understand a ...

I found this to be very intriguing, and definately want to read more. You have a great hook, using very few words, and that by itself is impressive. Imagry is ...

This piece was very well done, and I have to say I enjoyed reading it. You do very well with description and mood, both of which help draw the reader ...

Fair warning, you did tell me I could be brutal :) One thing I’ve noticed about life is there are a lot of “supposed to’s”. I’m supposed to do my ...

This was interesting, and certainly intriguing. The style is different than most, as many people are on the fence between first person narration and third person narration, completely ignoring the ...

I think you've done quite well on this, and I really enjoyed reading it. After giving many reviews, it seems to me that the hardest problem writers have on YWS ...

let me start by saying that I'm really glad you continued this, because I really enjoyed the previous three, and it took a while for this to come out so ...

I liked this piece because it was witty and clever. personification is a good source of humor, and I especially liked the part about Inspiration being out to buy cheese. ...

once again, the story was fun to read, and it's clear you have a talent for writing. If I had to suggest a way to make this chapter better, I ...

So, I must say, I enjoyed reading this, and I think you have done a good job with this piece. without writing a whole lot, you have managed to get ...

I must say I really liked this chapter, and I'm glad to see you continued writing this story. I don't have much critisism, except maybe for the end, where you ...

Hi JustMe, It's Psudiname again. Overall the chapter was good, but it could have been a little better. The main flaw with it was just how confusing it was. Switching ...

I liked this a lot, and just have a few comments. First of all, Scott Handel is an awesome name, where did you come up with that? that guy just ...

This was very well done, mainly because of it's mood. The way you use words serves very well to give the reader a feel for what the mood of the ...

Okay, before I start this review, let's get my duty as a nerd out of the way. there is no stargate galactica. stargate= a thing, battlestar galactica= a thing, but ...