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Thanks. :D

Thanks for the review! It was very helpful. :) It's funny that we ended up giving the same suggestion for each other's stories. :P

Like this: [ q u o t e ] text here [ / q u o t e ] but with no spaces.

*if you need any help whoops.

Yeah, that definitely helped. And the cat makes a lot more sense now that you explained it. Maybe it would be clearer in the story if people tried to talk ...

You're welcome. ( : Of course you can break any rules you want - but you have know you're breaking the rules and you have to have an artistic reason ...

Oh okay, that makes sense, but it contradicts her (understandable) horror at him killing his granddaughter. And she mentions earlier that she sees him as a father/grandfather, so it doesn't ...

I'm glad you liked it! And you brought up some good points, too. Thanks for the review! :)

Hi! I didn't read this, but I wanted to let you know this is way too long to be a short story! It's more like a novella. People will be ...

Thanks for the tips! I know there's not much going on, haha. It was just a short thing I did for a class, but now I have some ideas on ...

Thanks. :)

Hey, thanks for the review! The "for good measure" phrases were supposed to be redundant, actually. I guess I didn't pull it off well, huh? And Rebecca isn't really "shaken" ...

Some of my edits got messed up. :( I think you can figure it out though. I just meant to take out "that sounded" and "little."

Thanks for the tip on Donna's characterization. I'll have to think about that. Thanks for the review! :)

I'm glad I could help! Yeah, English grammar is pretty confusing. I've been around it my whole life and I still don't understand all of it. I'm reading Dubliners and ...