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Thank you so much! I went back and added more descriptions and more to help the reader, and make it flow much better. I really really appreciate your feedback!

So this was kinda just like a weird intro to what happens in her life after the accident. But I really really appreciate your suggestions. Especially the grammatical ones. I ...

I like your transition of the accident much more, thank you! and I completely understand the second correction. I wanted it kind of choppy, to show her wandering thoughts. What ...

I love this. For one thing, I can relate to this so well, and I think a lot of people can. I like how you described the narrator without just ...

I love the first one so much. I think it's the one I could relate to the best but its so short and simple but with so much depth! I ...

Wow, this was deep. I don't know what you were going for but as I read this piece I pictured a mother being hurt by her children and the pain ...

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Thank you so much! :)

Thank you so much for the review :) I think I know where you're speaking of. I'll try to rework those parts! Thank you so much for your kind words ...