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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Want You Back

    Hi, bailey good work here on your poem i want you back. It was very emotional and sad. You know at times when we make some decisions we end up ...

    Dec 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Light of my Heart

    i love your poem and the right balance with nature. your use of scientific terms also got the poem going. 'electromagnetism' 'electrons' 'The beams of light' thanks

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sorry dad

    I'm sorry dad that i couldn't be, all that you expected out of me. i know i disappoint in everything i do, and even though you hate me, i'll always ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wish You Were Here

    hi, you poem is simply emotional and very touching and brings toind the sweet sorrow in parting ways. your poem is nice. keep it up

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: lyric poetry

    thank you

    Sep 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Smoking Camels on Your Grave

    ummmmh well simply amazing touching wonderful it's just so so intresting i hope she sees it even on a latter date thanks cheers

    Sep 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lonely Hearts-A Preface

    mistakes: farther not father. i"m praise and i sincerely love the way you wrote your poem. it was intresting and captivating i also love the way the poem ended. quite ...

    Sep 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Broken - 3

    i have been following up your story broken. it has been intresting all the way. i am glad the story is now gaining more and more momentum probably from your ...

    Sep 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Peepholes from heaven

    helo your poem is quite intresting good figurative language nice stunts. but ther are some loop holes you have to correct thanks cheers

    Sep 3, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Mei (working title) - Prologue

    thanks for the story it's nice but has some mistakes in then genarally, its a nice work i'm praise cheers "the truth can set you free but you must first ...

    Sep 3, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bones

    my dear, cat-sama this your story is simply intresting. the more i read it the more hungry i become for more. it is so breath taking and exciting, hope you ...

    Sep 3, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Titleless Story (2)

    nice cute story. i think there are few punctuation problems. do erase them

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Titleless Story (2)

    really cute story

    Sep 1, 2008


Who overcomes by force, hath overcome but half his foe.
— John Milton (Poet)