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Re: I Want You Back
Hi, bailey good work here on your poem i want you back. It was very emotional and sad. You know at times when we make some decisions we end up ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: The Light of my Heart
i love your poem and the right balance with nature. your use of scientific terms also got the poem going. 'electromagnetism' 'electrons' 'The beams of light' thanks
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Sorry dad
I'm sorry dad that i couldn't be, all that you expected out of me. i know i disappoint in everything i do, and even though you hate me, i'll always ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Wish You Were Here
hi, you poem is simply emotional and very touching and brings toind the sweet sorrow in parting ways. your poem is nice. keep it up
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: lyric poetry
thank you
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Smoking Camels on Your Grave
ummmmh well simply amazing touching wonderful it's just so so intresting i hope she sees it even on a latter date thanks cheers
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Lonely Hearts-A Preface
mistakes: farther not father. i"m praise and i sincerely love the way you wrote your poem. it was intresting and captivating i also love the way the poem ended. quite ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Broken - 3
i have been following up your story broken. it has been intresting all the way. i am glad the story is now gaining more and more momentum probably from your ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Peepholes from heaven
helo your poem is quite intresting good figurative language nice stunts. but ther are some loop holes you have to correct thanks cheers
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Mei (working title) - Prologue
thanks for the story it's nice but has some mistakes in then genarally, its a nice work i'm praise cheers "the truth can set you free but you must first ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Bones
my dear, cat-sama this your story is simply intresting. the more i read it the more hungry i become for more. it is so breath taking and exciting, hope you ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
nice cute story. i think there are few punctuation problems. do erase them
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
really cute story
Sep 1, 2008
