powerofwords2008

[quote=" My mother’s ankles begin to crack, my sister soothes with herbal heal I will go, with May, when the healing is done. My father’s hands stiff with shakes, I ...

I wondered, how this all came to be, how this could happen to me. I wondered, why this all came to be, why this happened to me. i don't really ...

Tonight my life takes it’s last sigh over the clear skies, where the clouds are high. Where birds soar over the golden glen, I let the breeze cool my face, ...

Our hearts are unruled paper, but we are artists of words. We will write our poetry for the blind, read it to deaf ears, attempt to change cold souls. Because ...

But there’s millions of them, if we delve deeper In fields, on roads, soaring through the mist, reaching miraculous notes, climbing towards that shot after countless doors slammed down their ...

for the most part i don't really get this piece. i know you start the whole thing out by saying that sympathy is a sin,but upon further reading, i was ...

this is a good. piece as far as corrections however, you keep transferring from rhyme to non-rhyme which i am not sure whether or not you did intentionally, but the ...

[quote=" The cattle folks with their polished bells Are children (but only they can tell) Whistling Among other things, some forgotten mini-tune. If people could be As they are when ...

A fleeting Moment Or a long troubled time These are the hardships The hardships of time --- i like the repetition in the first stanza. also. i like the overall ...

i kind of like the echoes at the end of each stanza of the piece, because it shows the child's actual knowledge of what they are doing. and also it ...

I wonder if the walls of glass surrounding me Appear so clear, because there Never were such walls penning me in; There is no way out, Because the prison does ...

Can you feel the currents blowing On top of the world? Motionless waves rolling, And a wrath unfurled. nice quote. i like the overall meaning of the piece and i ...

if it hadn't been for the preface and the announcement that it was about your grandma that you gave at the beginning of the piece i would have been thinking ...

The city glares around you, As drifters purr and allure, “Hey baby let’s get out of here.” They’re all over, breathing. Standing so near. Such swagger, . good lines. i ...

Taking no time in nailing your coffin, Spending time as small children laughing. Okay. The first line of these two, while a great visual, I don't get. I mean, I ...