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This story is about a boy who befriended a spirit with mysterious motives.
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Guardian? Friend?
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- 5 Works
- 2,584 Words
- 13 min Reading time
- 11 Reviews
- May 10, 2016 Started
- May 31, 2016 Last updated
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