polkadottiger2

Hey! I like this piece, it is a great way of personifying the storm and you made use of great imagery. I have to admit, when you first made reference ...

Hey! This is just a comment -because I really have nothing to critique- but I thought this piece was beautiful. It made me incredibly sad, but it was so well ...

Hey perfectionwriter! I really like this piece, it has a very lyrical flow to it, despite the heavy content. This contrast makes for a dramatic and succesful peace. I like ...

Hey! I actually found this poem quite refreshing. Of course there are a few technicalities that could be corrected- but I'm going to focus on content. Overall this is dealing ...

This is amazing!! I love your use of repetition throughout, it makes it incredibly powerful. The way you have things placed is really great to, it reads kind of choppy- ...

I love this! The ending is perfect. Its kind of happy without being at all over the top, like a gimmer of hope; your not alone. I find some of ...

Very dark. I like the overall voice of this piece. It's consistent throughout and overall very well done. I especially like the repeated line of "this dark room is your ...

I like this piece a lot. You've made it powerful in a short amount of time. Here are some of the things I like, and also what I may consider ...

I have read and watched many different cases on cruelty to animals, but none has made me think as this has. The way you've incorporated first hand experiences makes it ...

I find this poem really intriguing. Your incorporation of spoken elements is an interesting technique, I think it is very successful in creating an heir of desperation in the poem ...

Hey! First off, its a great poem. It flows really well and definitely gets the message across. I especially like the overall meaning of this piece, as you said it ...

Hey! I love this poem, quite depressing, although I'm sure it wasn't intended to be cheerful. The flow goes really well, and I like the rhyme scheme a lot. Typically ...

I love this! You had me captivated right from the start, it flows well and you do a good job of keeping the reader interested without wasting time with setting ...

Its a good start and i love the concept of this poem, but there are a few things i would tweak. First of all, In the first stanza, it should ...

Alright, great story! I love the ending: It's unexpected, because even though her fate is determined from the beginning, the reader expects a struggle of some sort, or at least ...