polinkacreations

Hey there, I'm sorry for the delay! Here I am to review ;) So, let me jump straight into it - It was on days such as these that I ...

Hey there! I'm so sorry for the delay - I had so much schoolwork to do:( But hopefully, I will now give you the best review everrr :D Or, at ...

Hey Lorna :) Here as requested! Well, I love this poem. It is indeed short, but carries a lot of emotions across. Here's some nitpicks: To shut "GO!" - to ...

Well hello there! I was wondering when there's going to be a chapter about Soleil. Here come nitpicks: under the glass suns rays. - sun rays. Crunched into a little ...

Hey there, a review - as requested! Wow, creative! I like creative. :D Nitpicks ahead: Jibber-Jockey, Jabber-Wocky, Wickey-Wattle Tittle-Tattle And a tale shall be told That is now, oh so ...

Hey there:) Yay, another chapter! I guess I'll just dive straight into it, and I will then give you a general overview. I have never missed a night’s sleep. - ...

Hello there, thanks for asking to review:) I'll just get to the nitpicks, and then give you an overall opinion. not renewed from yesterday’s ritual piss up; - I agree ...

Hey again:) Wow, another awesome poem, and another awesome title! :D Once again, I am loving your descriptions. They create very vivid images, and that's always helpful. Majestic ceilings and ...

Heya there:) Thanks for requesting me, and sorry if I'm a bit late:) with your black trench coats and umbrellas - this line is a bit too long for the ...

Hey, I'm here as requested;) Here come nitpicks: my room locking - my room, locking the door. to wanna talk again! - to talk again. on my iPod as it ...

Hey there, it's me again. Another chapter, eh? Glad to see you evolve the story! Thanks for remembering me, very sweet of you:) Here come nitpicks: in a years - ...

Hello, here to review - as requested;) I'll start with the little grammatical errors, and then I'll comment on the plot etc. They’d been together for forty years, and they ...

Hello again:D Another poem, eh? Great:D Here come the nitpicks, then: soldier's - no apostrophe, just "soldiers". See how the king sneers, At every battle lost And jeers, At every ...

Hey there:) I really liked this poem, how it's so dark yet so emotional. No one told me, I stopped crying, - Maybe, "No one told me, so I stopped ...

Hey again:D Polly here. I have noticed that your writing is getting better. That is very encouraging. Here come the (not so many) nitpicks: in a researched manor, for Soleil. ...