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Re: Goodluck not finished getting there though
I really love this song! Impressive word choice. I like the way that it flows, and I love the theme of it. As Strange said, I could see a famous ...
Sep 9 -
Re: Still alive
First off, AMAZING poem. You did an excellent job conveying emotion, which is my favorite thing to see in poetry. Here are some mistakes that I noticed and my full ...
Sep 9 -
Re: The Rebirth Quartet (yes ik it's corny, gimme a break)
This is beautiful work. I can relate heavily to every singld poem. The word choice, The imagery, everything about this poem is outstanding. Here is my analysis of each poem: ...
Sep 8 -
Re: Knock Knock
I love the perspective of the poem. I am a huge fan of free verse. My advice for you would be to shorten the poem to make it more effective. ...
Sep 8 -
Re: A Sweet Facade
I really like the theme of this poem- very relatable and real. The rhyme scheme is good- however it is slightly inconsistent. Most of the words in your rhyme scheme ...
Aug 23 -
Re: Antoinette-Alice and the aliens
I really love this short story. I am not a Sci Fi fan, but this story was very interesting to me. I will say the ending could be a little ...
Aug 23