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Did you have to do this for school? I did something like this a long time ago. Anywhoo... Farthest distance flown in one flight: 1. My Own Design (tied with ...

You might want to check this out brutha. As for the story: It definately envokes alot of emotion and paints a vivid picture, but we dont really know anything about ...

To be counted as a review they have to be longer. I'm not sure what the cutoff for a post to be a review is but I think it has ...

well you have certainly earned your name with this piece of um... fiction? it is completely random and has no plot, conflict, or much creativity really. You should never write ...

Uncarved pumpinks stand atop the shelves, waiting solemnly for a child's touch and the cut of a knife to turn them into their more halloween-spirited counterparts. Madeline knows that no ...

It was at times likes this, when it was quite and the island seemed still, quiet Well that was the only mispell/grammar problem I found. I really like the story ...

You may be Crying, You may be smiling Crying shouldn't be capitalized. in fact you are kind of random with the capitalization. Besides that I didn't find any errors. This ...

Dear Nariel, The friend was a boy. ___________________________________________________________________________________ Clup, This is a pretty fun story to read but I think you need to put more of the

OK it was long (which is a good thing) and I will admit I didn't read it all. But i have a good reason. surely if you read through this ...

I think it was awesome and nutty it was a story abut an old man not a woman. I like stories like this a lot Ive tried to write some ...

Well I think you definitely should have written at least a little more to put up before you posted but OK. If you are only 11 and you are writing ...

caught ys and dragged us to the river What is ys? don't know what you are saying we waved boodbye and dove for the pavement goodbye These are two typos ...

Before posting anything you should review at least two stories or poems. Don't worry though when I joined I just started posting things also. If everyone just posted and no ...

This was another good chapter of midnight blue. The only typo I found was at the end of the veronica part were it said take a deep brathing.I would quote ...

Hey Ashley I guess I have another story to watch for from you. I really don't know how you can keep all these ideas straight. But anyways to the review. ...