Published October 29, 2008
I'm warning you, don't read this!
It was a dark and stormy night...
BLAHHHHHHHH
AND ALL THROUGH THE HOUSE, NOT A CREATURE WAS STIRRING, NOT EVEN A MOUSE.
death blehhhhhh
BOO!
the ghost was all, "wassup, yo, homeskillet?"
and everyone was petrified.
And then Haylie said, "hi" and everybody died.
and then zombies rose from the grave and killed everyone.
Except the ghost, cuz hes invisible.
So they all became ghosts.
And scared the first ghosts.
And they all crawled back into their graves, and then the people who had died became ghosts, and everyone was happy.
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Although most of what you say was true, that was EXTREMELY CREATIVE.
And when I wrote it, I was hyper, and wrote it with ANOTHER hyper girl, so you get where all this is coming from.
well you have certainly earned your name with this piece of um... fiction?
it is completely random and has no plot, conflict, or much creativity really.
You should never write in all caps because it is just terrible to even look at on a computer screen. but hey atleast you warned everyone.