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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Eunoia - Poem

    Thank you @aooborromeo for your kind review! I will definitely pay attention to my punctuation from now on:)

    Dec 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Eunoia - Poem

    Thank you so much @themagicalebonyfox ! I tried to get the whole aesthetic as I was also going to post this on Instagram :) And yeah the first two lines ...

    Dec 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chosen Ones: Chapter 1- Anastasia

    Ohh... That's interesting!

    Dec 11, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Among the Stars

    Oh lol! I accidentally put wrists instead of fists, lmao thanks for pointing that out. And I will think about slowing down the pace around Sirius' surprise! I didn't put ...

    Dec 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Among the Stars

    Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it :D I thought people wouldn't like the ending as it was cliche, but really good to know that y'all liked ...

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)

    OMG wow. The concept is so amazing. Writers usually write from the doctors/ scientists point of view. But never from the test subjects view. This story was so simple, yet ...

    Nov 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: ​Dramatic Effect

    Wow, I really liked this short story :) This was a fun and quick read. Definitely put a smile on my face. The fact that you got it published in ...

    Nov 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Lacrimosa

    Thank you for your kind review! I am happy that you liked it :D

    Oct 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Lacrimosa

    Thank you for the review as I never noticed these :)

    Oct 20, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Lacrimosa

    Thank you, your review was very helpful. Most of these sentences are the result of my laziness for editing%uD83D%uDE05 But thank you, I will edit this story again and try ...

    Oct 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: ramblings of a lunatic

    I feel I can relate to your rambling. Sometimes, from the pain of others and pain from inside of myself. The pain feels so much that I don't even feel ...

    Oct 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Blank

    I liked this poem very much. I loved how you used different colours and forms of the sun and sky to set the mood. For me, I think you should ...

    Oct 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Blank

    Oct 19, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Lacrimosa

    Oct 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Advertisement

    @buranko Will sure do!

    Oct 18, 2020


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