- Re: The Concord Ch. 1 Aug 21, 2013
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Re: The Evil Within (prologue and chapter one)
Chapter One The loud buzz jolted Darren awake. For whatever reason, that sentence made me giggle. It made me think he was getting tased or something. Besides, the words buzz ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: Luna 3.2
Anyone? Please?
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Luna 2.1
Thank you both! Sophia: I had no clue there were that many obvious mistakes. Thanks for pointing them out to me. Kaywiia: I'll be sure to post the next part ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Luna 1.0 (edited)
Thank you guys for the reviews. I'll be posting more once I get a few more. Careless- The dream was kinda nescessary. It gives you a lot of facts mixed ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Is he real?
Thanks all of you guys for the awesome reviews. I'm working on the next piece now, and I hope I don't dissapoint. :oops:
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: March 30th, 1991
I'm not sure what it was supposed to mean but I liked it and I have no clue why. That's just the way I roll, but anyway I liked it. ...
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: In Envy Of Goldfish,... really raw copy so attack! :-)
I like poetry that makes me feel what the author wants me to feel. Even if it had some grammatical mistakes I still loved it.
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Alone With Your Guitar
You definetly have a way with words. I love the way that when you write I can see everything you tell me. I can feel what you feel, see what ...
Jun 6, 2009