personalinsanity

wow. I didnt expect to get such a response for something that took me a few minutes to write... im flattered:). Thanks for all your help! ashlyn :elephant:

Thanks guys. I appreciate the reviews. I will keep your comments in my thought bank for future use. Ashlyn :elephant:

*chuckles* Thanks guys! It took me about 3.34 minutes to write. I just wanted to post it on a whim.I appreciate you taking the time to review it though, and ...

Thanks guys! I appreciate the feedback and will tweak the poem accordingly. Ashlyn

Hi Chardinay, you have a pretty name. Ok, you wanted to know what it was about so here goes: The main character is a girl who has inherited a mental ...

thank you guys for all your help and I will keep it all in mind as I keep writing. I appreciate it!

Thank you guys for your feedback. It is much appreciated because I am a beginner poet and am trying to learn the art. I'll try not to rhyme and will ...