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Re: Wasting Time to Camouflage
I liked this poem. It has some good points and descriptiveness in the beginning, but I felt like towards the end, it turned into a letter. Maybe if you added ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: My death wish
This poem was slightly confusing for me also, although I believe I got the gist of what you were saying. It has a powerful message behind it if you read ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: The Gate
HI! I liked the imagery in this poem, although there may be a bit too much. It took me a couple of times to see what it was saying, but ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Across The Dreams
This is a really nice poem. I can see in my head all the things you are describing and I went back to read it again once I was done. ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: If Roses Grew Where Petals Fall
This poem is very good and really checks in with me personally because I have recently lost my wonderful grandmother. I love all the visual descriptions and the sincerity of ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: The Haunting Voice
This is a really cool poem. I like how you combined present and past tense. I also like how you combine both love and fear for the same person. It ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: My Will
I love how much emotion you put into each stanza. Each one was concise but conveyed the message well. I really enjoyed it. Im just learning how to review or ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Glass Wall
I really like the way you made it all connect back to the glass. I also appreciate the message of the poem because, if I interpreted it right, I've gone ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
This is really telling of life. I am a Christian and I have seen this happen so often its crazy. Im not putting the religion down or anything but I ...
Jun 23, 2010
