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Thanks! I will definitely take this stuff to heart and hopefully be able to improve it. I agree with this all and will do my best!

Thank you for your kind comments! It is really sad, and I, too, like happy endings, but I like writing sad endings XD It definitely could use more detail, so ...

OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. It is so vivid and whimsical and gives me so many feels! Have you happened to have read The Mists of Avalon? That's ...

I get where you're coming from and I agree with it all. I've kind of decided I'm not gonna revise it again because of the giant plot-hole and laziness. XD

Thank you for the advice! I will use it to improve this. I agree with what you said.

You helped a bunch. I have thought about that teacher/no one speaking up thing, and that is a huge plot-hole I need to fix that I'm thankful you pointed out. ...

You're so freaking helpful, I can't even put it into words. Thank you for your nitpicks; I would have never seen those mistakes without you. You are so right about ...

Oh, my gosh. This is brilliance at its finest.

Yea, you read LMG to me in like third grade. I didn't know it was by HCA, though. Sorry, being lazy b/c I don't feel good. Thanks for the review.

Wow. This is awesome. It is such a unique idea. I would really like to know what inspired this. The imagery and symbolism is great. Usually I wouldn't like the ...

Oh my gosh, of course I'll join that club! Thanks for telling me!

You helped plenty! Your tips were constructive, and I will apply them to improve this story! I really appreciate it! I agree that I need to work on details and ...

XD Don't worry. Nothing's wrong with you. I hate it when I say something weird or do something no one else does and everyone's just like, "WE JUDGE YOOUUU." I ...

Thank you so much for your support! Your review means a bunch to me. I definitely need to proof read it, which I will get to ASAP. I know that ...

That's a very good thing to do. Keep doing that!