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Re: LAPIS :Chapter 22:
Hi! Pendr here for a review! A couple warnings are that this is the first I've read of this story, and my reviews mainly consist of details like punctuation or ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 23 Part 2
What's up! It's me, Pendr, to review this marvelous piece of writing for The Grinches! Know this is the first I've read of this story, so I could easily be ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 16) Part 2: Two-bit Bridle
Hey, Ho! What's up? I'm here on behalf of The Grinches/the Green Team :D I'm just here to warn you before I start reviewing that I have not read anything ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 16
Howdy! Here to review for The Grinches :) Just a quick warning, this is the first I've read of your story, and I do more detailed corrections and reviews with ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 6: Furiousity Killed the Skunk
Hello! Pendr here for a review! I'm here for the green team, The Grinches! I just want you to know that this is the first I've read of this story, ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 8- Ascension Dreams
Hey! Pendr here to review on behalf of The Grinches!! Just a warning, I haven't read any other chapters from this story, and I am a reviewer that does more ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Chrono Hustle #11 Prisoners
Hello! Pendr here to review for The Grinches/AKA:The Green Team. I'm more of a nit-picky reviewer, so beware :) Also, this is the first of this story I've read, so ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: the Burning night
Howdy! This is Pendr of the Grinches! There are a couple things that aren't a huge deal, but that I would suggest, and that would be to capitalized the first ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Alpha: TWG- Chapter 1
Hey, Artemis!!!!! It's been so long! (not really XD) I'm gonna do one of my nit-pick reviews, but your punctuation so far seems much improved :D “They go to the ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 39: The Sacrifice
So, there's a point where Lucian is strangling Billie and he asks her if she knows what it's like to hide who you really are. And she does. She's been ...
Dec 15, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 37: The Revelation
...... -BURSTS INTO SOBS AND CURLS INTO BALL- HOW COULD HEEE?!?! HOW COULD YOU?!?! -SOBS MORE- I DON'T WANT IT TO BE TRUE. NOT HIM. NOT LUCIAN. NOT HIM. NOT ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 14: The Attempt
Howdy doody! (I'm really running low on new prases). So I just really want to read this story without feeling obliged to leave a review, so I'm going to stop, ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 11: The aftermath
Wasssuuuupp XD You can see how creative I'm trying to be... What will I be saying at chapter 40?? Scary thoughts. "I stop walking, it’s Arthur." make this two sentences ...
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 10: The Impression
Greetings (Google is my resort for 'hello' synonyms now XD)! I'm so excited to be here reading this marvelous piece of art! Let's dig in! "...Calista pestering me about Lucian, ...
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 9: The Theory
Yo. (New words!) Let's get to it! “Are all rusties that violent?” Laurel asks when Sky tells them what we were talking about. “No,” I grin. “Just me.” Calista hits ...
Dec 5, 2014
