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Hey, there! Pendr here! Just a warning here, I haven't read the first two chapters of this story, and my reviews are usually nitpicks O_O I apologize in advance XD ...

Heyo! Pendr here on behalf of the Firebolts! Two quick disclaimers: I have not read part one, for which I apologize. Also, my reviews mostly contain grammatical nitpicks, again, for ...

Wow. This is awesome on so many levels. First, the descriptions of the battles and hate is epic, and second, the aspect of Christianity talked about is also something intriguing ...

Hello! I'm Pendr! I want to tell you that I have not read chapter one, but I am excited to read this. One more thing is that I usually do ...

Hey! Pendr here for a review! I've read/reviewed a couple previous chapters, but still haven't had the time to start from the beginning. So, because this novel is so amazing, ...

Hey guurl. I'm just gonna tell you all the nitpicks I find. Sound cool? Cool, brah. "noon-bells rang throughout alleys between cottage houses" I would just make this 'cottages' because ...

Woah. Let me just say that. I only have a couple nitpicks, and then I will SHOWER YOU IN COMPLIMENTS. "You had to bury her too," You need a comma ...

Heyo! Pendr here for a review! Sorry it took me a whole week to get to this; I was really busy! Anyway, quick warning, most of my reviews focus on ...

Me once again, starting from the beginning! "They tried to rebuild everything from scratch, however, the only success that had was with some steam power." 'success that' to 'success they' ...

Hello again! Still Pendr, still from Smaug :) -like Mario- Here we go! "I take off the loose knit cap that sat on my head and put it into my ...

Howdy! Pendr here, on behalf of Smaug! I just want you to know that this is the first of your story I have read, and I think I'll read part ...

Hello! Pendr here to review. I will be making lots of corrections grammatically and with puntuation. With that being said, from one Whovian to another, geronimo! Let's review! First of ...

This is amazing. I love the French, even though I don't know any XD This is very beautiful, and you should really continue writing more like this. French is a ...

Yo, fellow writer! (really professional, aren't I?) I'm Pendr, here to review. I believe I've read a few of your poems before, and I really enjoyed them, so I'm glad ...

Hello there! How are you on this dandy day? I'm Pendr, here for a review! I hope I'm some help! I agree with @SecreteJournalist that the numbers in the first ...