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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Borneo Bushmen Pt. 1

    Pink, Thank you. I'm reading a book on character development right now actually, and your criticism is well-aimed. I agree, and I'll do a lot to revise this. I'm working ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)

    Publishable. There is potential for a timely blog.

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A page for ghost notes

    Very neat, Kamas. I have a few stories about ghosts... none written down yet. I'm not a poetry critic, but I liked this lots.

    May 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!

    I recommend baggy pyjama bottoms.

    May 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sincerely, Brain

    Bravo!

    May 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: For the Being aware

    It's a bit surprising that you haven't read any existentialism. Don't spend too much time on books like Being and Time or Being and Nothingness... unless you find they really ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: To The Bullies: A Catharsis

    Thanks Toly, I think I can improve it by bringing it to a conclusion that resolves what I brought up in the intro. Glad you enjoyed. Pen

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do not click this.

    not too shabs. :)

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    I liked it. Captures all those contradictory perceptions that come with passionate love.

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements

    I love this idea, and it would look great on a poster that literary students could put on their walls. I don't know much about haikus though, and have only ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Cookie Whisperer

    I really liked it. There are places where I wanted more description and detail. For example, I wanted to know what the cookie's voice sounded like. Very eccentric and imaginative. ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    I also love that he hates facebook. Enjoyed the list. :D Only critical comment about the list is that the wording in it deflates his character somewhat. His voice in ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deleted 8

    I love this, Lumi. Identify with it. I'm not a well-informed critic when it comes to poetry, but I know what I like, and this seems to have guts.

    Feb 16, 2011


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