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Re: The Borneo Bushmen Pt. 1
Pink, Thank you. I'm reading a book on character development right now actually, and your criticism is well-aimed. I agree, and I'll do a lot to revise this. I'm working ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
Publishable. There is potential for a timely blog.
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: A page for ghost notes
Very neat, Kamas. I have a few stories about ghosts... none written down yet. I'm not a poetry critic, but I liked this lots.
May 30, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
I recommend baggy pyjama bottoms.
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
Bravo!
May 12, 2011 -
Re: For the Being aware
It's a bit surprising that you haven't read any existentialism. Don't spend too much time on books like Being and Time or Being and Nothingness... unless you find they really ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: To The Bullies: A Catharsis
Thanks Toly, I think I can improve it by bringing it to a conclusion that resolves what I brought up in the intro. Glad you enjoyed. Pen
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
not too shabs. :)
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
I liked it. Captures all those contradictory perceptions that come with passionate love.
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements
I love this idea, and it would look great on a poster that literary students could put on their walls. I don't know much about haikus though, and have only ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Cookie Whisperer
I really liked it. There are places where I wanted more description and detail. For example, I wanted to know what the cookie's voice sounded like. Very eccentric and imaginative. ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
I also love that he hates facebook. Enjoyed the list. :D Only critical comment about the list is that the wording in it deflates his character somewhat. His voice in ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 8
I love this, Lumi. Identify with it. I'm not a well-informed critic when it comes to poetry, but I know what I like, and this seems to have guts.
Feb 16, 2011
